1st Peer Review

Claire Williamson – https://clairewilliamsonlit.wordpress.com/2016/03/13/week-3-post-1/

“I think this is a really intriguing concept, the idea of ‘home’, and I think you have a really interesting take on the cultural divide between the white and Indigenous Australians and how it’s driven by their different ideas of ‘home’; I’d never considered it before! I also loved how you brought in your own personal experience with ‘home’ and how different culture can be.”

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One thought on “1st Peer Review

  1. michaelgriffith1 says:

    Good supportive peer review, but when you can try to include at least one suggestion for improvement. Your peer will appreciate this!
    *Please attend to editing your work carefully. Here is what I have picked up:
    *and how it’s driven by their different ideas = it’s ? What does this pronoun refer to here? Make sure the antecedent ( the noun that the pronoun refers back to) is crystal clear, otherwise your reader will get lost. See https://owl.english.purdue.edu/engagement/2/1/41/

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