6th Peer Review

Natasha Prudnicki – https://nprudnicki97.wordpress.com/2016/05/14/the-secret-affairs-of-meg-and-lummy/

“Hi Natasha,
I really like your first paragraph, concerning what Meg may be going through at this time with her Aunt Daise’s funeral and how she may be acting like her aunt to keep her memory alive and how her mother isn’t helping. I like how you expanded on this behaviour in the second paragraph, with regard to Lummy. The tone of this letter is friendly and sympathetic, yet cautionary, which I think is very fitting with the content of the letter. What a great blog, well done!! Just something minor though: watch at the very end of the first paragraph, there’s a lowercase “i” where there should be an uppercase “I”:)

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