Second Peer Review

Annabelle Barns-Licha – https://annabellebarnslicha.wordpress.com/2017/03/31/blog-three-charles-dickens/comment-page-1/#comment-78

“Hey Annabelle,
What a lovely, poignant paragraph. Your use of language is so simplistic yet so descriptive and you describe the heart of the city so perfectly. Your sentences are short but effective, your tone is gentle and calm and I love how you describe all the different people you come across in Sydney. Well done!!”

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