Third Peer Review

Nicole Walsh – https://nicolewalshblog.wordpress.com/2017/04/10/blog-post-4-week-6/comment-page-1/#comment-12

“Hi Nicole,
I really like your blog this week, it has a strong and emphatic voice that effectively conveys the message that you don’t approve of the arrangements Mr Gradgrind is making for his daughter. The rhetorical questions also help to drive home your argument about Mr Gradgrind not considering his daughter’s feelings. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, well done! 🙂

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