Eighth Peer Review

Alex Poeder – https://alexlouisesite.wordpress.com/2017/10/18/blog-9/comment-page-1/#comment-12

“Hi Alex,
I think you’ve hit the nail on the head with your first sentence about the human heart at conflict with itself being “the most complex, interesting, relatable aspect of the human condition”. Everyone has been at war with themselves at one point in their lives and it’s so much harder to do battle with yourself than with another person. I really like how you’ve elaborated on this point a little further, relating it to internal conflict and then linking that in with Faulkner’s work, with the example of Cash – well done! Just one thing I picked up on: double check and proof read your work before publishing it, I noticed a couple of spelling mistakes: “apsect” = aspect, “interal” – internal 🙂”

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